nyiddle's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[fear - a poetic flash]

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The graphics were bad, and in the name of construction critisizm:
You disobeyed the rules of poetry, first off, rhythm. You need to have a set amount of syllables in each phrase for it to sound right. The line I think I noticed that was "committing suicide". It should just be "suicide" only because there are a certain amount of syllables. Also, you can't go in and out of rhyme. For 1 or maybe 2 lines you rhymed, and then you got out of rhyme. If you do that, it sounds horrible and way too out of place. If you rewrite it and remade the flash to have better graphics and whatnot, it'd be better. So good luck for the next flash. Until then, keep it up.

Coiz responds:

Everything you just said is a lie. Poetry is the art of word play, and nothing more. I write poetry with rhyme, but this particular poem is written in free form. The rhythm in the poem can be found in the pattern with which certain lines were OUT of rhythm.

[The Witch Clock: Prelude]

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Not bad, but when MuffinClock says "freedom of speech, blah blah blah..." It's not actually freedom of speech. Being Wiccan is freedom of religion. Freedom of speech applies to the music now, but whatever.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

They're both apart of the same Ammendment to the Constituion.

[Killin´ Time]

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Not only was that horrible flash, but in case you haven't noticed, the ClockCrew is in no way 'out of hand' or 'a waste of time'. In fact, we are probably the biggest group of flash artists that contribute to Newgrounds. And did you, by any chance, look at any of the newer flashes by the Clock Crew? Yes, the first few were crap, but people protected it. Do I know why? No, I don't. It may have been because it was fifened, but if you haven't noticed, the Clock Crew is an extremely skilled group of flash artists. I'm tired of people fucking saying "Clock crew sucks because...." Because we are not doing anything to ruin your life on Newgrounds. Maybe I, or another clock, flames you on the BBS. That's no reason to get all upset and say "ALL CLOCKS SUCXX!!!111" So I've had it with you fucking clock haters. Do you even know why!? Fucking n00bs.

Asteroth420 responds:

Hey man i got nothing against the clock crew this is a symbolic metaphor of the Pun to kill time... fucking relax... you take your ¨crew¨ way to seriously

[Silhouette: The Mannequin]

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The body and the head were WAY out of proportion.

RedChalkDust responds:

I can't do that intentionally?

[Belligerence]

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Pretty good for a sprite video. Keep up the good work. By the way, the mic quality was somewhat good, but you should get a better mic or change the voice sensitivity or something.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Thx for the advice

[Streets of Misery]

Lol. I don't even get it.

I don't even get it, but that was awesome. It's like... All noir-ish, and then it's like "FISH!"

Poison-Rat responds:

you win the big price <3

[Lonely Anime]

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When I first saw Naruto in the beginning, I thought this might have a passing chance, but it's just a buncha registered anime characters crying. It makes no sense at all, and not to mention, if it's an anime movie, it'd need to have some sad Japanese music in the background. You fail at life.

KrockO responds:

Clock Crew is the lowest you can go.

[Seven Day's short -.-]

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Pretty good.

Dusk responds:

thanks....wasn't one of my best works... but yeah... it's a idea of my GF

[StrawberryClock-Hurricane]

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That was awesome!

JonBro responds:

All 10s? woah

[Pillsburry Vs. Santa]

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It made no sense at all why it would be that the Pillsbury dough boy would be fighting against Saint Nick, but it was good other than that.

David-Silver responds:

lol, thanks I guess, well its just a random fight scene, 2 characters everyone knows I mean, what else is more random!? XD