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[Daily2oonSE: AlbinoClock]

LOLOLOLO!!!11

FIFEN, LIEK OAKY!?11111!@2211elvenqqq

AlbinoClock responds:

ok

[fear - a poetic flash]

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The graphics were bad, and in the name of construction critisizm:
You disobeyed the rules of poetry, first off, rhythm. You need to have a set amount of syllables in each phrase for it to sound right. The line I think I noticed that was "committing suicide". It should just be "suicide" only because there are a certain amount of syllables. Also, you can't go in and out of rhyme. For 1 or maybe 2 lines you rhymed, and then you got out of rhyme. If you do that, it sounds horrible and way too out of place. If you rewrite it and remade the flash to have better graphics and whatnot, it'd be better. So good luck for the next flash. Until then, keep it up.

Coiz responds:

Everything you just said is a lie. Poetry is the art of word play, and nothing more. I write poetry with rhyme, but this particular poem is written in free form. The rhythm in the poem can be found in the pattern with which certain lines were OUT of rhythm.

[The Witch Clock: Prelude]

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Not bad, but when MuffinClock says "freedom of speech, blah blah blah..." It's not actually freedom of speech. Being Wiccan is freedom of religion. Freedom of speech applies to the music now, but whatever.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

They're both apart of the same Ammendment to the Constituion.

[Silhouette: The Mannequin]

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The body and the head were WAY out of proportion.

RedChalkDust responds:

I can't do that intentionally?

[Belligerence]

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Pretty good for a sprite video. Keep up the good work. By the way, the mic quality was somewhat good, but you should get a better mic or change the voice sensitivity or something.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Thx for the advice

[Streets of Misery]

Lol. I don't even get it.

I don't even get it, but that was awesome. It's like... All noir-ish, and then it's like "FISH!"

Poison-Rat responds:

you win the big price <3

[Seven Day's short -.-]

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Pretty good.

Dusk responds:

thanks....wasn't one of my best works... but yeah... it's a idea of my GF

[StrawberryClock-Hurricane]

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That was awesome!

JonBro responds:

All 10s? woah